Friday, October 9, 2009

Homework and Sentence Structure Worksheet

HOMEWORK: After you finish reading Act II of The Crucible, write a paragraph discussing John Proctor's relationship with his wife: Elizabeth. I have no specific idea for you to prove. I simply want you to think about what you have to say about the topic. However, this isn't just any paragraph. I want you to focus on trying to experiment with each of the eight sentence types. You can find the notes directly below in two forms: Microsoft Word document (you can copy and paste this into Word) and JPEG (you can print this directly, but the page order that's displayed is backwards)

GUIDELINES:

Make sure to separate the sentences in list form, leaving extra spaces between each.

Identify the sentence pattern, using the “Eight Sentence Patterns” notes (see attached).

Bring this to class on Tuesday and it may just count for your quiz… ;-)





Thursday, October 8, 2009

PowerPoint from Today

The Beginning of the End: GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION


 


 


 


 

Though many of you may think grammar is challenging, I'm here to tell you that it really isn't. There's a formula to it just like the ones you've studied in math class. I love to teach it because it's not the typical subjective English task where all the answers are shades of gray. So, I'll try to break down the sentence patterns in this packet. Let's start off with this basic fact:


 


 


 

Proper, formal English has EIGHT (8) sentence patterns. That's it!! Just 8! You can make these sentences longer by adding commas, conjunctions, and semi-colons. That is grammar in a nutshell!


 


 

Here is a list of the terms I use to identify the various parts of each sentence pattern:


 

NP

noun phrase

A noun and its modifiers (hence "noun phrase"): can function as a subject, direct object, indirect object, subject complement, or object complement

S

subject

  

SC

subject complement

a noun, pronoun, or adjective that renames or describes the subject of a sentence

DO

direct object

  

IO

indirect object

  

OC

object complement

a noun, pronoun, or adjective that renames or describes the object of a sentence

V

verb of being

OR

linking verb

Examples:

  • is
  • are
  • was
  • were


 

  • has been
  • have been
  • had been

V(int)

intransitive verb

 

V(tr)

transitive verb

 

ADV

adverb


 

OR


 

adverbial of time or place


 


 


 

part of a sentence that performs the same function as a normal adverb by describe the

ADJ

adjective

 


 


 

 
 


 

THE EIGHT SENTENCE PATTERNS


 

1.  S + V + ADV

   The verb (TO BE) is followed by an adverb indicating where or when.

My friends are here.     


 

NP V ADV

subject                 

                                         
 

 The adverbial indicating where or when may be a prepositional phrase.

My friends are at the library.     

  
 

NP V ADV     

       
 

2.  S + V + ADJ

The verb (TO BE or LINKING) is followed by an adjective that functions as the subjective complement.

        His clear tenor voice was quite lovely.     

  
 

NP V ADJ

         subject to be      subject

         verb complement


 

The cake on the table looks delicious.   


 

NP          V ADJ

subject          linking subject

         verb complement

The adjectival functioning as the subjective complement may be a prepositional phrase.

The supervisor was in a good mood today.     

  
 

NP V ADJ

subject          subject

     complement


 

3.  S + V + SC


 

The verb (TO BE or LINKING) is followed by a noun that functions as the subjective complement.

        Mr. James has been a teacher for forty years.     

  
 

         NP V NP

subject to be      subject

verb complement


 

At a very early age, Joan became a Buddhist.  


 

         NP V NP

         subject linking subject

         verb complement


 

4.  S + V(int)


 

  The action verb takes no direct object.

            In a few weeks, my cousin will arrive.

   NP      V

         subject      verb

intransitive     

Even if the action verb is followed by a prepositional phrase, the verb is still intransitive as long as it does not take a direct object.

In a few weeks, my cousin will arrive with my uncle.   


 

         NP V

subject      verb

intransitive


 

5S + V(tr) + DO


 

   The action verb is followed by a direct object.

           The archer shot an arrow into the target.

NP V NP

         subject verb direct object

transitive


 


 

6.  S + V(tr) + IO + DO


 

The action verb is followed by an indirect object and then a direct object.

             Smithers gave the employees a raise.

NP V      NP     NP

         subject verb indirect object direct object

transitive


 

7.  S + V(tr) + DO + ADJ

The action verb is followed by a direct object.  The direct object is followed by an adjective functioning as an objective complement.

        The jury found the defendant guilty.

NP V      NP     ADJ

         subject verb direct object objective

transitive         complement


 

8. S +V(tr) + DO + (OC)

The action verb is followed by a direct object.  The direct object is followed by a noun functioning as an objective complement.

        Most people consider Jacobsen a loyal friend

NP V NP2          NP2

         subject verb direct object      objective

transitive              complement


 

Note:  The second NP, the direct object, receives a different numerical designation (NP2) because it is not

the same as the subject (NP1).  The third NP, the objective complement, receives the same

numerical designation as the direct object (NP2) because it is the same as the direct object (Jacobsen

= friend).


 


 

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Random

I know you probably won't like this song, but I was listening to it on the way home and thought of you guys during the second verse. So, I thought I'd share the lyrics and the link of one of my favorite cover artists: Kina Grannis...do with them what you will. I know I'm corny.

See you tomorrow.

LYRICS:
This is how it works
You're young until you're not
You love until you don't
You try until you can't

You laugh until you cry
You cry until you laugh
And everyone must breathe
Until their dying breath

No, this is how it works
You peer inside yourself
You take the things you like
And try to love the things you took


And then you take that love you made
And stick it into some
Someone else's heart
Pumping someone else's blood


Sunday, October 4, 2009

The Crucible Vocabulary

Noun

Adjective

Adverb

Verb

Person Quality

Describes a Noun

Describes a Verb

Action

disseminator

dissemination

  

disseminate

  

disdainful

disdainfully

disdain

 

trepidation, trepidity

trepidatious

  

chastiser

chastisement

chastisable

 

chastise

blasphemer

blasphemousness

blasphemous

blasphemously

blaspheme

 

stringency

stringent

stringently

 
 

contempt

contemptuous, contemptible

contemptuously,

contemptibly

 
 

remorsefulness

remorseful

remorsefully

remorse

 

turbulence

turbulent

turbulently

 
 

contriteness

contrite

contritely

 
 

virulence, virulency

virulent

virulently

 

propitiator

propitiation

propitiative

propitiatingly

propitiate

 

resignation

resigned

 

resign

 

deviousness

devious

deviously

 

slanderer

slander

slanderous

slanderously

slander

vilifier

vilification

  

vilify

ruer

rue

  

rue

  

surreptitious

  
 

heinousness

heinous

heinously

 
 

vindictiveness

vindictive

vindictively

 
 

malice

malicious

maliciously

 

maligner

malignance

malignant

malignantly, malignly

malign

 

iniquity

iniquitous

iniquitously

 

Friday, October 2, 2009

Revising your Paragraph: First Impression of Abigail Williams

What I Expect for Your Paragraph:

  • Identify which of the 6 logical fallacies you have used.
  • Identify other errors with the structure and mechanics of your original paragraph.
  • Create an interesting hook.
  • Type and resubmit paragraph with rough draft attached.


 

Helpful Hints:

  1. Books are heavy. They are placed on a shelf (when handwritten). They tilt (when typed).
  2. The correct way to cite a quote:
    1. "I am happy" (Thompson 20).

      (If the sentence that you are quoting ends with a period, do not put include it. Instead, please put the period on the outside of the parentheses).

    2. "Are you happy?" (Thompson 20).

      (If the sentence that you are quoting ends with a question mark, include it. You must also put the period on the outside of the parentheses).

    3. "Yay!" (Thompson 20).

      (If the sentence that you are quoting ends with an exclamation mark, include it. You must also put the period on the outside of the parentheses).

    4. "…when I was telling the story…" (Thompson 20).

      (If you are not quoting an entire sentence, you can use ellipses […] to show where you have shortened the quote. You must also put the period on the outside of the parentheses).

  3. You may change words in a quote. The words you've changed must be surrounded by the following brackets: "She [Abigail]" or you can simply state "[Abigail]," leaving the original "she" out.